Whole

Whole

A Poem by Wild Willow Blue
"

Evil and Goodness stand hand in hand..

"

Falling despair

suffocating life within us

strangling the very heart of

what makes us whole

 

Ragged breathing

nothing seems right anymore

falling from ruined hands into

what makes us whole

 

Fire burning

all souls annihilated

none can stand up to

what makes us whole

© 2012 Wild Willow Blue


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Wild Willow Blue
All of my poetry comes from the heart.

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All good poetry should come from the heart :) My only suggestion, maybe try putting this poem into the past action tense... might make it more powerful

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 30, 2012
Last Updated on May 30, 2012
Tags: Evil, Good, Goodness, Terror

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Wild Willow Blue
Wild Willow Blue

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I am 33. I am gay/non-binary. I started writing in 8th grade. The person whom I started writing because of, I never got a chance to thank. We were never good friends, but we knew each other. I owe her.. more..

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