The structure of "The Lady with the Braids in Her Hair" c a p t i v a t e d my attention. Its zig zag format forces the reader to absorb the emotions.
CONTENT
The image of a dragon is what appealed to me the most. The writer appears to be isolated in their mind; an unlawful prison. Reflecting on the title, I have imagined the narrator to be a young girl; she is entrapped by the past. She is a sensitive soul with much to say. She lets her emotions converge into a feral image of a fiery dragon; this is her release.
Beautiful work, Wild Willow. I see much beauty in your words.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much. This review is amazing. I am SO glad you were so engrossed in these words, and th.. read moreThank you so much. This review is amazing. I am SO glad you were so engrossed in these words, and that they painted a clear picture for you. Thank you, Ria.
The structure of "The Lady with the Braids in Her Hair" c a p t i v a t e d my attention. Its zig zag format forces the reader to absorb the emotions.
CONTENT
The image of a dragon is what appealed to me the most. The writer appears to be isolated in their mind; an unlawful prison. Reflecting on the title, I have imagined the narrator to be a young girl; she is entrapped by the past. She is a sensitive soul with much to say. She lets her emotions converge into a feral image of a fiery dragon; this is her release.
Beautiful work, Wild Willow. I see much beauty in your words.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much. This review is amazing. I am SO glad you were so engrossed in these words, and th.. read moreThank you so much. This review is amazing. I am SO glad you were so engrossed in these words, and that they painted a clear picture for you. Thank you, Ria.
I like your structure just as much as I love how much emotion and power you were able to inject into this poem. It practically oozes anger and sadness, and that makes it all the more powerful, especially since so few words are uttered. Great job! Keep up the good work!
I am 33. I am gay/non-binary. I started writing in 8th grade. The person whom I started writing because of, I never got a chance to thank. We were never good friends, but we knew each other. I owe her.. more..