The Lady with the Braids in Her Hair

The Lady with the Braids in Her Hair

A Poem by Wild Willow Blue
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Inspiration is a cool thing.

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Forever’s spent alone

     In crying

            Shadows

Dark crying shadows

Filled with fear

    Pain

         Rage

Hate and love are dying

She doesn't remember

                Your face

It hurts,

                  Screaming,

      It hurts!

Your forever’s spent

                         Alone

With a fire-breathing

        Dragon         

© 2013 Wild Willow Blue


Author's Note

Wild Willow Blue
All of my poetry comes from the heart.

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INTRODUCTION

The structure of "The Lady with the Braids in Her Hair" c a p t i v a t e d my attention. Its zig zag format forces the reader to absorb the emotions.

CONTENT

The image of a dragon is what appealed to me the most. The writer appears to be isolated in their mind; an unlawful prison. Reflecting on the title, I have imagined the narrator to be a young girl; she is entrapped by the past. She is a sensitive soul with much to say. She lets her emotions converge into a feral image of a fiery dragon; this is her release.

Beautiful work, Wild Willow. I see much beauty in your words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Willow Blue

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. This review is amazing. I am SO glad you were so engrossed in these words, and th.. read more



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INTRODUCTION

The structure of "The Lady with the Braids in Her Hair" c a p t i v a t e d my attention. Its zig zag format forces the reader to absorb the emotions.

CONTENT

The image of a dragon is what appealed to me the most. The writer appears to be isolated in their mind; an unlawful prison. Reflecting on the title, I have imagined the narrator to be a young girl; she is entrapped by the past. She is a sensitive soul with much to say. She lets her emotions converge into a feral image of a fiery dragon; this is her release.

Beautiful work, Wild Willow. I see much beauty in your words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Willow Blue

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. This review is amazing. I am SO glad you were so engrossed in these words, and th.. read more
Powerful emotions on this page, succinct and to the point, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Willow Blue

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
This is really good. Thanks for sharing Wild Willow :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Willow Blue

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Mr D! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Mr Dunne Poetry

11 Years Ago

Yw. I sure did :)
highly emotive, yet concise, well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Willow Blue

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I like your structure just as much as I love how much emotion and power you were able to inject into this poem. It practically oozes anger and sadness, and that makes it all the more powerful, especially since so few words are uttered. Great job! Keep up the good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Willow Blue

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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Added on April 1, 2013
Last Updated on April 1, 2013
Tags: Pain, Rage, Fear, Hate, Love, Alone, Shadow, Shadows

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Wild Willow Blue
Wild Willow Blue

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I am 33. I am gay/non-binary. I started writing in 8th grade. The person whom I started writing because of, I never got a chance to thank. We were never good friends, but we knew each other. I owe her.. more..

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