The message is all between the lines for me, I think this is written from pain.. It's an "I don't need you anyway" retort to being rejected. That's how i see it anyway but what do I know? Nice.
This would make a great song. Something about it just makes me think of a song. Lyrics that a singer needs to belt out for the enjoyment of the audience. It was a cute little poem. See not all poetry needs extreme imagery to be good.
Well I think you could do better especially with the
last two lines...but gotta start somewhere, which is always
good!! I'd like to see more of why you don't want someone
to worry about "me".
Okay so i am really sorry but i am going to create a new account i will leave my poems on here but my new things will be posted on my new account bye (from this account) more..