A night within a day

Eclipes

A night within a day 

 

A night within a day

What exactly dose that mean

An eclipse is coming

That will bring darkness

In the morning

 

A night within a day

The sun will disappear as the moon hides it

It’s known as the eclipse an amazing time

 

A night within a day

Author's Note

PLEASE IGNORE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ERRORS
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Reviews

[Dizzy]

i like it! I always thought that eclipses are awesome.

[LeeLee Ryder]

Great title ... SO Ringoesque.. Ringo gave us the phrases 8days a week & Hard day's night---You're in good company.. Love the lines about darkness in the morning & The sun disappearring ...
Brief but powerful.. (I'm into brevity so keep it up)
LLR

[Lee*]

A very nice way of putting it. Nice work!

[Kyle]

Oh i love this, i feel like i was there as the moon drifts before the sun
"An eclipse is coming
That will bring darkness
In the morning "

Is my favourite line

[μορπηευς]

oohhh thats so cute
i like theway u worded it

[An owl on the moon]

Beautifully spoken and moving. I love to walk outside and view the sunlight and the moon and stars.. What wonders in the world. Thank you for sharing!

[Jordan]

Very simple and well written. :)