Star light, Star bright

Star light, Star bright

A Poem by there is no more from me on this account :( sorry
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I WONDER

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Star light Star bright

 

I’m sitting alone by my self thinking

About the stars they glitter so bright

They shine light around so we can see

In the dark, I wonder what it would be

Like all ways up in the sky staying there

And not moving and I wonder what stars are

They shine so bright

They light up the night sky and the streets

 

Star light Star Bright

© 2010 there is no more from me on this account :( sorry


Author's Note

there is no more from me on this account :( sorry
Please ignore grammar & spelling mistakes
Please tell me what you think :)

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Well, I love the stars and the thought of the brightness of them. Your questions make me think. It might be developed a bit more, but it is a good topic with sweet sentiments. Keep working at it!! The sentences are a bit run-on but you said to ignore grammar. It would polish the poem to fix that.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 31, 2010
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there is no more from me on this account :( sorry
there is no more from me on this account :( sorry

Victoria, Melbourne, Australia



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Okay so i am really sorry but i am going to create a new account i will leave my poems on here but my new things will be posted on my new account bye (from this account) more..

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