The Black Thorn

The Black Thorn

A Poem by there is no more from me on this account :( sorry
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A poem from a while ago that i posted on another site but am not useing

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the black thorn

Of a black rose is poison

it sinks in to you with pleasure

its feels like you are drowining

it feels like you cant breath

but oncce your eyes close

there is no waking up

© 2010 there is no more from me on this account :( sorry


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nice,it is intense and i like how simple it is in a dark way.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I agree simple, yet intense. nicely done...

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This poem is quite simple; yet so intense in mood.
Very sharp and powerful lines.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a cool poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 28, 2010
Last Updated on January 28, 2010

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there is no more from me on this account :( sorry
there is no more from me on this account :( sorry

Victoria, Melbourne, Australia



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Okay so i am really sorry but i am going to create a new account i will leave my poems on here but my new things will be posted on my new account bye (from this account) more..

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