The Dream I Never Had

On a journey, I never started
With a wife, I never married
On a road, we never knew
To a house, we never lived
To look for a child, we never had
So as to show It, the love, It never seen
Hoping to live in the harmony, we never thought of
And to see the world, as we have never seen it before
To get to the top and never fall
so far up and never look back
Then at the end, to leave this path and never return
Just to find out that all this never happened
And I wake up from a dream I never had

Reviews

[Oyindamola Shoola]

Well written and thought provoking. It reveal the fantasy and dream we wish for a future that we have little or no control over.

[Chinedu Ubah]

Thanks alot, Oyin

[Winslow Des Totes]

Very heart wrenching but thought provoking too. Good write.

[Chinedu Ubah]

Thanks alot

[MadalaJose]

just the title, I was expecting a poem full of unfulfilled dreams of an unfulfilled person. But there is more.

and the ending "Just to find out that all this never happened/And I wake up from a dream I never has". Sounds like a dream inside a dream. That's pretty creative. I like it

[Chinedu Ubah]

Thanks for your comment

[Saddam]

Just to find out that all this never happened
And I wake up from a dream I never has

Its amazing. Like it......................

[Lace]

This is nice Christain. Keep it up.

[Chinedu Ubah]

Thanks bro.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

i wanted wat else you wrote about that you never had. what a good way to grab the readers attension. i loveee it.

"On a journey, I never started
With a wife, I never married
On aroad, we never knew
To a house, we never lived " #WORD

[Chinedu Ubah]

Thanks for dat