You, Tonight

Now tonight I spent alot of time
Thinking of what went wrong
I have only found one reason
That I was what went wrong

Now I love you with all my heart
And tonight was not the same
Because us sitting there talking
Brings me to where I'm sane

I love spending time with you
Sitting hours and just talking
Talking about the stupidest things
About the time we went walking

But those days are over for us
But that was your choice and plan
But I will always love you the same
I don't think you could understand

Reviews

[Emberlorna]

This really touches the heart...You have expressed sincere emotions in this wonderfully written poem :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I really like this one

[Frankie]

This one I love too. Especially that first stanza, it opens the poem up very well. It told a very lovely yet sad story in just a few words. This is the second poem I have read by you and so far I think you are a very good poet. Keep up the good writing!