Extraordinary Lovers

The

Lovers of artist

Lovers of writers

Lovers of soldiers

Lovers of fighters

At night your hearts are frozen in frost

You feel worthy of more but banish the thoughts

You're an extraordinary lover

Cradled by your tears you fall asleep

When you awake the water is deep

Your permeable souls don't drown in sorrow

You live the lives of tomorrow and extraordinary lovers

The artist demand inclines

The writers wandering mind

The soldiers limited time

The fighters protecting the blind

When the season rush subdues

All they have is you and an extraordinary lover

Author's Note

Comments and critique are valued. Thank you for reading

Reviews

[khalid]

i think you meant here that all people are lovers in somehow, i believe in that. when love is mentioned, people think directly of a man and a lady in love but for sure love is so much bigger than that..love is life..

[Nina Burke]

I like your analysis but I was expressing how difficult it is to be a lover to someone that is not always there.. Mentally or physically. How these extraordinary lovers manage to make it through the lonely nights...These extraordinary lovers remain loyal.

[khalid]

it is really hard..sometimes i say, to be always single is better than to be single for some time..

[Distant horizons]

This is really nicely concieved. It could be about anyone of those mentioned, or all people in general, who we only get to see a fleeting glimpse of their story. What lies beneath those glimpses is such complex lives we rarely get to know about. Or I could be completely wrong :-)

[Nina Burke]

Its fascinating that there are so many ways to interrupt the poem. There are no wrong interruptations! Thank you for reading

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[justjenn_2u]

I simply love this and think you could pump a poem out about a writer's wandering mind standing alone. Wow, kick a*s and I enjoyed.

[Nina Burke]

Thank you and great idea!!

[David Scott]

I like that you used very simple vocabulary and concrete logic to weave this tapestry that pictures the exceptional experience of knowing a lover.
Wonderfully accomplished the titles promise.

[Nina Burke]

Thank you for the review!

[Acer]

Another nice poem.

[Nina Burke]

Thank you!!

[Acer]

My pleasure :-)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

love it, makes one think.........

[Nina Burke]

Thank you

[The Nude Writer]

Amazing poem. I love the 4 subjects :) and solid rhyming :) rockin!

[Nina Burke]

The four subject represent a broader group of subject. Thanks and you get a glass of milk for being the 2nd commenter haha

[Nina Burke]

Subjects*

[The Nude Writer]

Yay thanks :)