Dance For Me When I Die

Dance, dance for me when I die

You'll make me cry

If you cry for me

You'll make me unable to move on

If I hear your wail

You'll make me hesitate

To travel the new cloud trail

Do not cry

Do not fall behind in life

If ever so move on

Don't dare try and follow me

Hear my commands

From above I'll be miles into the sky

Flying I'll be but an invisible speck

As I said once before and once more

Dance, dance for me

Dance with me

Just dance when I die

Crying eyes dry hurts

So just dance

Reviews

[E.A.B]

This is really touching.

[Cerise]

Wooooww..you are a fabulous writer...ur poem touched me..and I am glad that i got to read it..:)..beautifully expressed

[Kawaiikitty96]

I have no complaints whatsoever: this poem was great! Two thumbs up!

[Shannen Forrester]

The kind of poetry I love, taking a sad subject and forcing joy in to it :)
Brilliantly written and a joy to read.

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

It so cute ^_^
*pardon me for a man to say you're work is cute, 'cause it really is*
it was conveyed cheerfully, but I feel a little bit sad haha
Sorry, I really suck to all the dying stuffs ^_^
but overall I like it, so much ^_^

[Time's The Bond]

Haha thanks yeah just something that came to mind, I don't like to think of death as a sad thing in life, I like to think of it as moving on.

[Holly Mason]

enjoyed many lines in this piece
dance do not cry or you will make me cry-filled with images
like the title very interesting content
thank you for dancing for us