Decieving Love

Kind of boyxboy when I wrote it but you can think another

A low cunning deal yes

Though you did feel something

…

Did you not?

Is your heart a knot?

In the forthcoming becoming

Days I did say

I'd never let you leave

Heave back and forth

Run, run, run

I'll catch you for sure

Like a dog and fetch

You'll be my ball

And I'll catch you when you fall

Like I am running to catch you now

My heart is rushing

If you do

I'll never have relief

And I'll have to force you

Please don't say it is disgusting

I had no choice

Loved another man

As you're just a boy

Hand on one hand on another

I love you

Now that is so

What is the difference?

Give me your hand?

Reviews

[~LoveMeBoldly~]

It kinda sounded like this could be a song, that would be interesting to see! But I enjoyed it a lot:) It has a lot of emotion explained in it even though the lines are very simple. Good job with this!

[Time's The Bond]

haha thanks

[~LoveMeBoldly~]

your welcome:)

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

Waahh!! >.< love it super.. hehe

In love it doesn't matter whether your both the same sex or opposite. it may be a selfish thing to say, yet were also people who can feel like normal people do, yaoi's are not freak as others think they were. other people may also think that it's a sinful thing to do, yet like normal people we can't control the phenomenon of falling in love. It's too sudden and sometimes we can't chose the people that we would loved. As love by nature its unpredictable & uncontrollable. ;P

Go Yaoi >.<

Good job with the poem ^_^

[Time's The Bond]

Yes correct may it be religion, religious people need to reread the bible, God never said anything against homosexuals nor for it he didn't say anything about it. All he said was "Love each other" Thought just to let people know I take no sides in it... I just leave it and let it be, this was just inspired by some random thing

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

cool hehe yeah ... there's no sides involve it's just stating ones opinion hehe... I'm hoping other people might take it that way.. ^_^