A Man's Hand

Written: 1-27-13

By: Emily Lui

From what I hear

A man's hand

Is warm

Bold and strong

Just my thoughts

I think a man's hand

is meant to be that way

for reasons

To comfort the lover

To wipe the tears

To keep a strong hold

If they should ever catch their falling lover

To warm the cold hands

To embrace the lovers chin

To give a warm vibe of love

To let them know

They will never let you leave

Even if a thousand miles away

Just what I see

Though now today

A man's hand every man's hand has blood

Has the drops of tears from the lover whom he made cry

Has faults he found written all over it

Has only touched the outer beauty of the girl

He holds

Reviews

[Felecia]

Truth and completely beauty come from these words and this marvalous piece of work. All of what you've written in here I like to find one day...maybe I'll find the perfect guy that will be like this.
Anywho, very well done. I like it very much

[Ambereen]

So true .... Wonderfully written

[Rusty]

dont know what to say

nicely crafted

[Time's The Bond]

Well this is just one of them I have many others! please do check 'em out!

[falling_toxic_rain]

True! Sadly....
Nice write.

[***The Lost***]

Such truth behind you words. Our generation is a failure to all those that came before. We are said to be building a brighter future, but to me it looks like we are doing more destruction then good.

[Night]

...beautifully spoken words of truth my friend...! I am only beginning to learn this...=)

[Time's The Bond]

I'm glad, remember a women only wants love and should have it. Though she does not need it she can fare quite well without it so be good to your lover show her you're worth it.

[Time's The Bond]

What is a man's hand today?