Pure Sunset

By: Emily Lui

I sit here and wait

Wish to believe

Stop my tears

Stare out

See the sunset

This sun before my eyes

How it ascends high

Happily no matter

How bad the day before

Wise is the sun

To keep going

Forgetting that day

Making eyes shine

With radiance

Its gift

Stare on forever

Wonder

How far my eyes take me

Wonder who to defy

Watch the sun

Wait

Stare forever

So on through this swift life

Reviews

[Time's The Bond]

I would like to thank everyone for their reviews I really appreciate it! Please do check out my other poems. :-)

[R.A. Youngblood]

It's pretty good! I specially like the flow, it's so imaginative..watching the sunset...Wonderful! Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy! :D

[Leslie Philibert]

Lots to like here, I noticed especially the fine last lines.

[Rhea752]

sunsets are beautiful and so is your poem

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I love watching sunsets...I think they can be so romantic

[Tex]

lovely. I liked the last line. It brought to my mind that our life passes as quickly as the one days travel of the sun... sun rise - passing through the sky - sun set... an illustration of our life.

[MandaBear]

Nice flow. This is cute and nicely written.

[Night]

...good flow, I can tell already you have quite the imagination and poets heart...good.:)

[Time's The Bond]

Thank you!

[Phillitup]

This has nice flow and is intriguing. Nicely done!
Best regards,
Dell

[Falling Leaf.]

I agree that the last line is a bit unclear. Other than that, this is cute and inspirational.

[Time's The Bond]

"One" was supposed to be "on" if that helps I fixed it a bit

[Falling Leaf.]

Now that clears things up! :)