Run Away

Run Away

A Poem by The Revisionist
"

for the runners

"
Of every race we run,
everything now...
will simply be a memory.
The race has no name,
because imperfection...
is nameless as it is unfinished.
Running in circles,
we are reborn...
every morning we wake up changed.
Of all the runners,
we all want to be run aways...
we all want
to run
to be free
to feel alive
to be different
...
but the secret is obvious.
It's a secret and so,
everyone knows.
It's this...
W
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always

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© 2014 The Revisionist


Author's Note

The Revisionist
I pray you enjoyed dear runners.

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Exactly true that we always have a choice! Thank's for sharing:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Revisionist

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review :)!!!
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9 Years Ago

Your welcome!
I would suggest you to take note of grammar. I interpreted your words as you have a choice not to join the rat race and be different. Yes we have the choice always - just that we don't realize it at times, and if we do, we don't have the courage to be different. We don't realize that there is enough place for each of us to be unique and leave our mark.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Revisionist

9 Years Ago

I never noticed! Thanks for telling me >•<
True that and fairly said :) thanks!!!
This something I have been trying to get across to those who think they have no choice. YES WE DO, always have and always will. This is perfect.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Revisionist

10 Years Ago

yes we do! thank you very much :) it's nice that you can see it's perspective.everyone does choose, .. read more
enjoyed this a lot.....beautiful message in last .....you always have a choice.......

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Revisionist

10 Years Ago

:) oh the one on the left is me the other is my best friend-inspiration haha.
anne

10 Years Ago

god bless you both...keep smiling...... :)
The Revisionist

10 Years Ago

thank you, :) same to you

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Added on July 29, 2014
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