Drunkard

still drinking

We're all a little drunk,
drinking in a little of
everything...
desire
want
love
life
...
I am
drunk drinking
every little bit of you.
As I see you every time..
when ever you're on my mind
I can wake up and sleep to it all,
your everything from then up til now.

Author's Note

your awesome reviews are wanted! :)

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Very interesting my friend and enjoyable read, we all are drunk in our own way...awesome!

[The Revisionist]

haha, thanks. glad you enjoyed it :)

[Mirna]

you're really creative in how you use the words and how you structure the poem, it was a lovely read:) well done xxx

[The Revisionist]

thank you :3