Beautiful Blue Eyes

Your eyes are so brilliantly blue,

And,

As we lie in the silent stillness of impending dawn,

I gaze into them intensely,

Green and yellow; gray and blue,

Are the colors,

That so flawlessly fuse.

 

As they blend,

Like the incandescent colors,

Of the mornings interchanging sky,

I whisper to you softly,

Amid the restless struggle,

Of luminosity and gloom,

“I will always love you.”

 

I’m dreaming in dazzling colors,

Waiting for the day,

Of the freedom to love,

And to choose,

Who it is I want;

Which will forever be,

You.

 

And now,

That the words have been bled,

From this pencil,

The blazing desire,

To love and roam free,

Glistens in the depraved darkness,

That lives within me.

Reviews

[Jessica]

Amazingly beautiful work here. Great imagery of the blue eyes. The stanzas flow wonderfully. One of my favourite lines has to be "of luminosity and gloom, 'I will always love you." Simply beautiful.
The ending is superbly written too. The way youdescribe it enchants the reader. "The blazing desire." Simply beautiful. Well done. Simply Well done.

[Lorraine]

Your words are very colorful and imaginative. I like the way you fused your words into something beautiful and creative. Nice Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Mauricio Montoya]

now thats love. great job nice piece

[Brown Bull]

Wow, bled from a pencil... that is beautiful. I write with a typewriter, but my hoves tend to hit the wrong key on occasion.

[Victoria Thornton]

Aww, that's sweet. Much love for this one!!! ^-^

[B0Beauxs]

This is amazing.

I am so touched by this, it flows so beautifully, and the imagery is just hypnotic.

The last stanza is particularly beautiful- "And now, the words have been bled... The blazing desire to love and roam free, glistens in the depraved darkness within me" That makes me shiver.

Really beautiful piece.

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

This is absolutely wonderful. The imagery...just, wow!

"As they blend,
Like the incandescent colors,
Of the mornings interchanging sky"

You brought this scene sharply into view. Loved it. To my libraray this goes.

~True

[Jessica Mai]

This is so beautiful. You have such a way with words and the descriptions are just perfect.

[angelkiss]

wow. this is AMAZING work. its so descriptive that i can just see it happening.

[Jibey]

I like the way the pencil expressed the deep-felt emotion and the sense of longing for what cannot be in the now... Good images, especially of the colours, that support the emotional intensity, underpinned by some nice alliterative phrases.. a romantic tour de force!