Hate me

I'm going to fight for what I believe is right,
I promise; I will survive,
And when I'm ready to die,
I will not break down and cry cry,

I'll stand up for what I believe,
Individuality, I will achieve,
I won't look like them,
I won't be polished and put on display like a priceless gem,

I won't fake a smile,
To look good in the mirror; I won't go a single mile,
I'll be who I want to be,
The inner beauty is all that I will see,

I'll be happy on my own time,
Throw your insults, I'll remain blind,
Hate me,
But you won't make me.

Reviews

[Vito XYZ]

It's good since it's you, I especially like the last line in order for you to be truly you not letting others affect you is the only way.

How ever I feel a bit sad about the way you seem to resent everyone, no time to look for companions in life, no time to seek out others, Living by your own rules and having no heed for anyone else. A bit sad but your choice but then again I am more or less the same

[Tahna]

Kick a*s chick, This is great and it really really says something! I also love your presentation (if thats the right word) Love the red and black, its cool, awesome keep up the good work :)

[Raivenne]

"Hate me,
But you won't make me."

Yes! That is it right there in a nut shell! I love this!

[Beatles9322]

This is AWESOME! It's so kick-a*s! You go, girl! I wrote a poem that is smiliar. It's called "Take Action!" :D

[Dante Walker]

Really good ^.^ It may just be me but it almost seems as if you meant it to go to music... But regardless, the rhyme scheme is powerful and it gets the message across really well

[Devons]

Brilliant final verse!! This is very very good. I really like the defiant anger that comes through in the words and the way they are stated. As if cutting the very paper on which they are written.

Quality.

[~ Otto Girl ~]

I love this poem it shows that you can stand up for youself and shows that you make up who you are.

[Epic Destruction 911]

Im speechless (L)

[deeps]

Wow! This is really powerful and so well written.
Such strong and powerful emotion here. I like this alot.