You have an interesting rather deep vocabulary Kristy, spread out into story land.
I visualized the stories intensity. Being honest, work it again it's worth it find the rhythm with them heavy words. Mind a small example. 2nd line... an simplfy.
Enters effulgent domains an ratify a deal. Points to your subject, creepy guy.
I liked it, polish and you could be awesome with... experience. Work it you.
Wow, this is an amazing write.. I love the way you constructed it, all the possible innuendos, and the depth involved in this piece. Thank you for sharing :D
You have an interesting rather deep vocabulary Kristy, spread out into story land.
I visualized the stories intensity. Being honest, work it again it's worth it find the rhythm with them heavy words. Mind a small example. 2nd line... an simplfy.
Enters effulgent domains an ratify a deal. Points to your subject, creepy guy.
I liked it, polish and you could be awesome with... experience. Work it you.
I'm 24 years old
I am a happily married woman as of April 30th, 2011
I have two kitties that I adore
My husband and my little sister are the lights of my life
I've been a writers since I was .. more..