I'm Innocent
A Poem by
*~Kristy~*
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
I wasn't there,
I wasn't involved,
I'm innocent,
It's not my fault...
© 2010 *~Kristy~*
Reviews
This is interesting. It's like you're in court or something and you have to defend yourself. But, I think the repitition is a bit much.
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
i hate when people throw around the word brilliant when it's not really appropriate.
now this, in my opinion, is brilliant.
bravo!
Posted 14 Years Ago
i hate when people throw around the word brilliant when it's not really appropriate.
now this, in my opinion, is brilliant.
bravo!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
i understand you here. you are trying to make a point while staying on top of things. afraid that if you stop saying it you will fall and start to believe you did something to cause it and in fact you are not innocent. good work :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
i understand you here. you are trying to make a point while staying on top of things. afraid that if you stop saying it you will fall and start to believe you did something to cause it and in fact you are not innocent. good work :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
The idea here is overdone by the repitition. Can you expound on it and make some more lines to back it up?
Posted 14 Years Ago
The idea here is overdone by the repitition. Can you expound on it and make some more lines to back it up?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
At first I thought it would be as lyrics but I kept seeing the same words again and again. I am sure there is a reason of that. Well done
Posted 14 Years Ago
At first I thought it would be as lyrics but I kept seeing the same words again and again. I am sure there is a reason of that. Well done
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
interesting work i like it and also know how you feel
Posted 14 Years Ago
interesting work i like it and also know how you feel
quite an interesting piece of work. however, i'm not sure why that one stanza was repeated over and over again. other than that it's good
Posted 14 Years Ago
quite an interesting piece of work. however, i'm not sure why that one stanza was repeated over and over again. other than that it's good
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Added on March 15, 2010
Last Updated on April 28, 2010
Author
*~Kristy~* Williamsburg, KY
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I'm 24 years old
I am a happily married woman as of April 30th, 2011
I have two kitties that I adore
My husband and my little sister are the lights of my life
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