Give Me Reason

Black skies all around me,

Creatures of the dark that you can't see,

The ground caves in,

And out of me releases neverending sin,

 

Fire explodes in time and space,

This is the end of the human race,

I creep along still alive,

In this pain I will always survive,

 

No one will ever dwell with me here,

Theres to much to fear,

But then you creep from under the destruction,

And bring promise of good construction,

 

You bring joy,

You are so much more than just a boy,

But still I fear,

That when I wake you won't be here,

 

Give me reason to believe,

That you will never leave,

That you aren't just like the others,

That you won't just go to find another,

 

I know that my personal hell is worse than most,

But that doesn't give me rights to boast,

I don't want to be here anymore,

I've been here too many times before...

 

 

Reviews

[Eternally Elemental]

Oooowow

'Creatures of the dark that you can't see'
'Fire explodes in time and space'
These lines are my favorites. Creatures of the dark is very good image, creatures that follow us around in our emotions and traumas. A mental creature that no one else can see. Hence the scene of a 'hell' worst than most.
Fires exploding across time and space show the whole universe crumbling. It goes beyond our own hearts and taints everything around us in a dull destructive way.
Terrible, terrible hurt. Falling down again is hard, but getting up is harder. But the rise only promises the best. And those exploding fires in time and space suddenly become something beautiful. A stunning part of life and nature.

Lovely piece. In all its hurt and in all its hope. I hope you find or found that reason to hope.

[Twistd1]

First let me say, Wow! Great Poem.
When your profile paged opened, as always I read the 'bio"..
Then the poem.
I applaud your talent for your age, and being able to identify with such pain, at such a young age. Trust me, each one will hurt less and less.. as the heart and mind--somehow build an invisible wall- protecting the vulnerable areas. In 20 years, you'll know what Im talking about.
Keep writting.. its great healing therapy.

[JustKeith]

Well expressed!