Love Poem

I'm not so good with love poems usually...So, I sorrrrrrry if it sucks :)

My dear I love you,

Believe it to be true,

I'll never leave,

Because without you I cannot breathe,

 

No matter how awful my life may be,

You swoop down to save me,

One word is all it takes,

To make my heart awake,

 

Then that beautiful smile,

It makes everything in my life worthwhile,

A touch of the skin,

And there goes my pulse racing again,

 

A warm hug,

I feel so safe and snug,

Everyday I memorize your scent,

It's so amazing -heaven sent,

 

That wonderful kiss,

It is nothing but pure bliss,

Your soul is so true,

Eyes such a deep unfathomable blue,

 

Please don't ever leave me,

Because that would be the day I would cease to be free,

Please don't ever stop loving me,

Because I would never stop missing the happiness you bring.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I'm not so good with love poems usually...So, I sorrrrrrry if it sucks :)

Reviews

[Eternally Elemental]

Blissful overwhelming overdose of emotion :D

It is very uplifting and very touching in each line. I like the way it addresses the other person directly, for some reason that's hard for me. I always end up writing in third person... weird.

Unfathomable blue. Beautiful image. It was a good love poem. Keep it up because you can only get better.

[Dead_End]

Excellent poem!!!!!!!

[Mystic]

nice poem!!!! keep writing... it certainly not sucks..............

[Hi]

Not bad..It's better then any poems that i write so don't feel left out if you are... You are a really good writer!

[Coyote Poetry]

It don't suck. Nice words to read to on a quiet night to the one you love. A excellent poem.
Coyote