We Never Felt This When We Called Each Other Friend

Your beautiful blue eyes stare right through me,

Making it hard to think or speak,

Your hand passes gently over mine,

And suddenly there is no such thing as time,

Your smile makes the darkness in my heart bright again,

I never felt this when I called only called you friend,

Your breath on my lips,

Fills me with a selfless blithe,

I won't leave you not ever,

I'll stand by you with every endeaver,

 

My green eyes stare right through you,

Giving you so many feelings that are so new,

My heart beats at an unfathomable speed,

And my desire is filled with a deep passionate need,

My fingers trace circles in your skin,

You never felt this way when yuo called me friend,

Air enters and leaves my lungs at a quick rate,

And the pupils in my eyes start to dialate,

Everytime blue and green meet,

I get tremors from my head to my feet,

 

We never felt this when we called each other friend.

 

Reviews

[nzjem]

Great poem girl, I guess Im reviewing this one as I feel I can relate! you translate raw emotion into words which is something I struggle with, I guess I write by associating emotions with physical objects and you write from the product of how someone / thing has made YOU feel so it's in some ways more personal, I feel really drawn in as a result- fantastic stuff x