His Eyes

Just a poem

His Eyes 

His eyes are beautiful but full of evil,

The good he exposes is quite deceitful,

He'll break your heart and run your mind,

And stab your back in a minute's time.

Author's Note

I'm in the process of finishing :)
Really stumped, though

Reviews

[Michael G.]

A good beginning. I would like to see where this goes.
Keep writing.

[Mone`]

I really enjoyed it even though I typically don't fancy romance type writing. I enjoyed how it rhymed but didn't appear to use the cliche, over rated rhyming technique taught when younger. Good work :)