Freakin Sweet Poem

Roses are red,

violets are gold,

get On Your Knees,

and do what your told.

Reviews

[Constance]

The title is a lie. Please tell me you are not going to quit your day job? Are you seriously thinking this is poetry?
Let something natural, uncliche, flow from your soul. Don't fret over it. You may just find that almost anyone CAN write good poetry.

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

Interesting. I'm not sure I would call this a 'freakin sweet poem' - it seems a little cliche with the 'roses are red' thing. this seems to be written by a bad writer, but this is only one piece, and there is nothing else to view of yours, so I can't judge the writer as of yet.