My Sarah tonen

Endlessly spiraling
I go
desperately reaching
starved of her touch
lucid curves ascend
eclipsing rythimc sighs
as my un quenched lips
whisper hopelessly
into this loneliest
abandoned cavern
again
again and again
quiet echos pace
pounding thoughts
held restlessly below
under layers and layers
of unfulfilled desire
i await in constant
syncopation
driping faintly
the sound of
surrendered
pluse
suspended
In her
toxoplasmatic
spell
my
my sarah
my sarah tonen

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Dear friend,

I read your poem about your longing for Sarah and the way that her absence has left you feeling lost and alone. Your words were so raw and honest, and I could feel the intensity of your emotions as I read them.

The way that you described your unfulfilled desire and your constant longing for her was so powerful and moving, and it added a sense of vulnerability and intimacy to the poem.
I thought that your poem was a beautiful and heartbreaking reflection on the pain of separation and the way that it can leave us feeling lost and alone.

[Throwing Romeo]

Thank you for that.
Grateful for your
time. And well written
thoughts.

[Betty Hermelee]

a bit haunting and dark, missing a loved one, sinking to depths of ocean....head pounding with thoughts of her....an abandoned cavern.... many of us have those thoughts form time to time...your writing is vivid and sensual in parts....well done!
Best, B

[Kelly]

Speaks to me on many levels. We seem to have the same uncommon visions of verse.

[Throwing Romeo]

Thank you Kelly