Patina on bronze

Tribute the teacher jacob erin-cilberto

bare to the bones
whetherd, boiled or
honed
his challenge
to review

arbitrary themes
stiched into his seems
heartfelt sleeves
reaching past
the surface
of you

short ways of longing
distilling the breath
of loves unfulfilled
desire

streetlight memories
patina on bronze
blue green tones
to admire

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

a very interesting piece. i have many questions, but i dont know what to ask first.
the scatterred thoughts and imagery in this verse was stellar. it pulls you under and then raises in the air. the way the poem commands the reader's attention then takes you through ups and downs, turns and turns was magnificent.
there is something effortless yet harmonious about this piece that really stuck to me.

[Throwing Romeo]

this is a string of thoughts
inspired by the work of Jacob erin-cilberto
who i encourage all to read.

Thank you for your generous review.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i do follow Jacob. some of the finest work i ever read. maybe we should start a fan club?