Only in the Rain

                                             She

                                          never kisses

                                        me without a dew

                                      she gives me pleasure

                                               In the oddest way

                                                      like her hair flip 

                                                              turning away

                                        we kiss so passionately...

                           only in the rain

                         no love for me,

                        dry is my bane

                       playful kissing, 

                        fostered by the lightest mist...

                                                       if sprinkles should dot her lips                                                                           

                                                   I taste her magic,so truly missed

                               nothing but pouring rain can release our pain

                                                   crashing thunder from far away

                                               more time to love her in this day

                            the wetter she is...

                              the deeper we kiss

                                 she kisses me insane

                                      never in sunshine

                                               only in the rain 

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Extraordinary ,flowing gentle love poem with visuals that support the concept beautifully.

[Throwing Romeo]

Thank you Ken!

[Soren]

I loved the format of this poem. It was interesting and flowed well.

[Starbaby]

Storms (both physical and emotional) often fuel passions and intense emotions. A lovely write, full of longing and emotion.

[Obsidian]

Like a fervent storm that floweth over in the rain, and runs dry in the sun. One can feel the intense passion, and hints of longing, in these lines. 'never in the sunshine only in the rain'. Touching.

[Throwing Romeo]

Thank you Obsidian,
I appreciate this kind,
poetic review. I'm looking
forward to visiting you
and your writings.

R.

[Matthew Kult]

Romantically dreary. Some people's passions come during the oddest of times. Great read.

With love,

Matthew

[Throwing Romeo]

Thank you Matthew.
I appreciate you for
taking the time for
reading and
read moreThank you Matthew.
I appreciate you for
taking the time for
reading and
reviewing
this poem.

[emmajoygreen]

Only love can write words like your poem. Your memories, your emotions here are as visual as you have allowed them to be, .

' taste her magic,so truly missed #
only pouring rain can release our pain
crashing thunder from far away
more time to love her in this day.. '

[Throwing Romeo]

Sweet of you...
Thank you Emma!

[Chris Shaw]

no love for me
dry is my bane

Deeply felt poetry. You convey your emotions in a very touching way. Beautiful work. Pleased I stopped by.

Chris

[Throwing Romeo]

Thank you Chris,
Lovely visit indeed ~

[Emily B]

Curious that there are no reviews. There are worlds of wonder in these words.

[Throwing Romeo]

To grow as a writer I shut off the review option for one year.
(New Year's resolution)
Thank you for choosing
this to read and comment on.

[Emily B]

I can respect that. I'm not much use as a serious reviewer. I do like to leave a comment so that a poet knows I've been to visit if I like something.

[Throwing Romeo]

I've always admired how you boil down to the bare bones...

[Emily B]

I come from a long line of women who talk a lot and never say anything worth hearing. It's important to be succinct.