On Deft Ears

Opaque walls

silence screams so clear,

look--and find me here.

Thoughts of grey

blurred by sorrow;

no longer

longing

for tomorrow.

Reviews

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Trust me, I feel this, my dear poet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love "no longer/longing" i like that turn of phrase....and the oxymoron "silence screams" and i agree it does often scream louder than any booming voice...and it hurts worse too.

nicely compact and powerful.

[WhiteWillow]

Thank you for your kind review, jacob.