One Moment

At first, quarter past;

all seemed to be standing still

...until the hands moved.

Reviews

[nazia]

wow.. few words and great writing.. thousands ways to contemplate

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and then the hands moved...life holding its breath until the next move...like the moments in a baseball game in between pitches..the inaction is still an action.

[WhiteWillow]

Lovely interpretation! I think it"s what i love most about sharing my writing: seeing what others see. Thank you for sharing Jacob

[ANTO]

The unseen hands of the Universe perhaps? Brilliant haiku WW.

[WhiteWillow]

You're too kind. Thank you Anto

[Tate Morgan]

Time waits on no man It masters fate with earnest callous Caring for none in favored mercy helping no whom it shows malice.Wonderful thought and made me think again about the eternal river of time and place thank you

[WhiteWillow]

Thanks for stopping by Tate, I appreciate it

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome nice to have you back

[willweb]

Nice, the timing was perfect in this short piece.

[WhiteWillow]

Thank you willweb. No pun intended, I'm sure. ;)

[willweb]

Hmmmmmmmmm

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful write indeed. Short but powerful...:)....

[WhiteWillow]

Thank you Sami. I love haikus. I spend more time on less words, and love the power they have.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)....