Secret

A Poem by WhiteWillow

Wait just a second.

Before this moment is gone,

you need to know that...

© 2014 WhiteWillow

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jacob erin-cilberto

i like this...even the poem is a secret...i like how you left the reader hanging at the end with the ellipsis ......

Posted 9 Years Ago

Alex	Brilliant, a cliff hanger... I'm left wanting more! Such power in so few words. Posted 9 Years Ago Brilliant, a cliff hanger... I'm left wanting more! Such power in so few words. Rating /100

willweb

...............okay, now what? Just kidding. This one definitely made me think.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Then my work here is done (with this one piece, anyway).

wait! wait!

masterful. i had a thought of being on a ferris wheel and one side of the bucket having a monumental failure .... grab my hand!! oooops

Posted 9 Years Ago

Solitary_Streets

This is a great haiku. the structure is perfect, and is simple but thought provoking. I love haikus like old kerouac and beat poets did back in the day. They were great and so is this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you, SS, for your kind words

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Added on December 3, 2014
Last Updated on December 3, 2014

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WhiteWillow

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I'm just someone who enjoys writing. Its a great creative outlet, and I love challenging myself to write something better. Being among others who share in this joy is inspirational. more..