Once More Over Again

Once More Over Again

A Poem by Ryan

 

 

 

   Is it wrong

 

To feel this way

           About you

 

   Why do I Lie,

 

  And say

     Everything is okay

 

    Why do I dream

 

About days

    That will never come

 

      Why do I cry,

 

   For the one

who might make me die inside

 

Once More Over Again

© 2008 Ryan


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This is really good. I especially like the first few lines:
"Is it wrong
To feel this way
About you"
I must say, you did a very good job on this. There's not much more I can say.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Fantastic write. Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 1, 2008

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