The Other Side

The Other Side

A Poem by Ryan
"

I have a secret .... that is somewhat portrayed in this poem.

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              Someone,

                 Lost,

          Hidden away,

             Confused,

Afraid of persecution,

 

             He dies inside,

His secret sworn to himself,

        He lives in himself,

         Bound by the truth,

 

          He loves one,

  And he loves another,

              He cries,

            

             Not loved by either.

© 2008 Ryan


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Nice job, Ryan. The heartache is shown really well in this poem, even though it's so short and simple. But that could be because I feel what you are trying to say.
Like I said, nice job, and keep it up.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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