Enigma

A poem

Diamond dewdrops, silvery horse,

Untainted innocence stays its course. 

Topaz ring, rising sun,

Unchanging euphoria, can’t be undone.

Rose-quartz sunset, tender kiss,

Soft and sweet, untouched bliss.

Sapphire sky, reflection in rain,

Peaceful, majestic, free from pain.

Emerald eyes, sweetened lime,

Smooth and easy, not moved by time.

Ruby fruit, open heart,

Unchecked passion from the start.

Carnelian flower, flame burns brisk,

Wild and new, a daring risk.

Amethyst crystal, curtain drawn,

Beauty and tension reveal their brawn.

Obsidian stone, midnight’s scare,

Bitter-sweet, painful, almost despair.

Opal dream, colour-streaked dove,

Who can unravel the mysteries of love?

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

Wow a gem poem, I liked the way it flowed, the rhyming, the words, all blend so well,.....

[Scarlet]

This is well written, it has good flow to it :D Some of the lines are quite inspired. For some reason i particularly like "Silvery horse" "Reflection in rain" and "Flame burns brisk" good job, keep up the good work!

[Amera]

This is beautiful and a joy to recite aloud. Thank you for entering this rhyming couplet poem in my contest. Bravo!

Love,
Amera