The Same.

This is a concrete poem, its two male symbol's facing each other. its about the way i feel towards other men o-o cause yeah, i like men anddd women

I find the same, attractive.

Is it a mental disorder?

Is something wrong with me?

Am I damned to hell?

I’m not to sure the answers,

But I do know its not a choice.

I don’t choose to be..

Well me.

Its who I am and im trying to accept it.

I want them to accept it.

The world.

Me.

You.

Everyone.

I want the acceptance.

It wasn’t my choice, I swear, I promise.

Believe me.

I’ve tried changing,

But I can’t find the sharp needle,

Hidden in the giant haystack.

Im overly frightened,

Something is wrong with me,

But it’s no mental disorder.

That I’m attracted to him.

Author's Note

boop bup concrete

Reviews

[GamingGal]

Pros: I like how, to me, it sounds like a mental dialogue. The rhetorical questions are quite nice as well. And the fact that I understand you makes the poem hit home. I have experimented with the same before. I like guys and girls. And I've been raised in church, live in a town dominated by churches. So, I understand, which makes me enjoy the poem a lot more.

Cons: None.

Overall: This is a great poem of self-conflict, of having to come to terms with something that people frown at. Great job.