Lonely 2

Lonely 2

A Poem by WhimsicalAsh
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Edited "Lonely" almost a year later, see how you like it :)

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The nights the auto-phobia hits me
Doesn't make it better when no one's with me
Feelings creep around unintended
Wish I could figure out that I am affected
I want to save my inner mentality
But either way it'll end in fatality
Nonetheless I will know forever
The truth of my over analyzing
People will leave for the better
Sadly it isn't surprising
I know that my session is ending
And I'm obviously not progressing
So with that I know I'll be lonely
Continuing to die off very slowly...

© 2016 WhimsicalAsh


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WhimsicalAsh
What do you think of the changes I made? Let me know below :)

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Added on February 21, 2016
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WhimsicalAsh
WhimsicalAsh

Tacoma, WA



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I am a teen who uses writing as one of my great escapes. Writing is a way to express the unexplainable thoughts that I develop, and can be an outlet when I have challenges in life. I mostly write poet.. more..

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