Lies

Diminishes your truth the more you do it

The toxic sliding through orifice.

It is recognized as questionable action

and more than just the word "lie".

It is regretful and slick

with no beneficial result.

The toxic poisons the flower of the individual

slowly as words are slipped through the falsly set tongue.

Wilts are forming, turning it black if the secondary notices.

But it's continuously turning it brown if you continue...

either way it ends up black

You're on the losing side either way

Reviews

[modtoddinc]

A sad poem. Good ideas are here, I think if you spent some more time with this one it could be exceedingly good. Careful of sentence structure and tense. Your writing will be more effective and meaningful without simple grammar issues that can be easily fixed. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.