Chapter 2

Chapter 2

A Chapter by WhenOceansCry

Jade was even more confused then before. She was lost. She was never one for listening to more then one person talk so when  everyone began to -quite literally- scream there ideas out, she spaced out and  began to think of the sponge bob theme song.

 

Although she was forced to come back to reality when she heard someone say something about names.

 

"What if we were lost? what happens then? we can't scream out 'Hey where you ...girl!?' or whatever it will be too stupid."

 

Jade looked to see who had asked and it so happened to be the one with the thick rimmed glasses.

 

"He has a point."  the red head replied.

 

"I'm Crystal.. and my guidance is a turtle...turtle dee doo...just thought I would start." She said pausing at each, questioning what she should say. After an awkward pause, she showed her necklace, which sure enough, had a turtle...that was green, around her neck.

 

"Jade. um, why do we need to say our guidance?"

 

"So we can get along." Crystal said nodding. Jade looked to everyone who just shrugged in return.

 

"Uh huh, well, my guidance is a spider."

 

Jade said showing her necklace of a black widow.

 The girl next to me, the one with the white dress began to speak.

 

"Um, Im skye! and my guidance is a dove."

 

"Im taylor, my guidance is an owl."

 

"Some owl. My name is David, and my guidance is a platypus."

 

everyone gave David a weird stare.

 

Taylor began to laugh.

 

"Shut up and move on." Came his remark.

 

A sigh escaped the next person lips and all the attention turned to him.

 

He moved his hair a little out of his face while he spoke.

 

"My name is Adam. My guidance is a tiger."

 

The sparkly blue eyed girl was next.

 

"My name is Grace, and my guidance is also a tiger."

 

"Do you to know each other?" Brandon had asked.

 

"Yea. We are step brother and sister." Grace replied.

 

"Hey Im brandon. and my guidance is a hynea."

 

"The name is Kacie and my guidance is a Giraffe."

 

"Kayden. My guidance is a wolf."

 

"Alexia." She added in a small wave.

 

"My guidance is a bat" She smiled broadly revieling sharp teeth.

 

"My name is Dysteny. My guidance is a wolf."

 

"Yo, i'm lily and my guidance is a rabbit.' Lily said doing a failed attempt at being a ganster.

 

"Hey there. I am Yuki and my gudiance is a snow leapord.'

"I'm  Spirit and my guidance is a black panther.'

 

"Im never going to get use to the names.' Kayden said with a sigh.

 

"We'll learn." Spirit said waving a hand.

 

"well now that thats over with, what should we do now?" Adam asked.

 

"Easy. One, no fighting, two, we go back home, two of us playing rock paper sissors, who ever wins picks the directions."

 

Kayden decided to go and so did taylor.

 

Im pretty sure you can guess who won.

 

"Alright, follow me then." Kayden said as she led them in the opposite direction of where everyone else wanted to go.

 

'Maybe if I lead them to the head council and tell them what they plan to do...maybe I can finally be respected... better yet, maybe he'll notice me.'

 

With that thought in Kaydens head, she had no reason to think otherwise, she led the others without a second thought in the world

 



© 2011 WhenOceansCry


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Hey Taryn, this is Ashley. Just gonna say that chapter two is good, but there are some minor errors, which you might want to change. In the first paragraph: "Jade was even more confused then before. She was lost. She was never one for listening to more then one person talk so when everyone began to -quite literally- scream there ideas out, she spaced out and began to think of the sponge bob theme song.", the word(s) 'then' should be 'than' because that is the one that you meant, and 'sponge bob' should probably be spelled like so "Spongebob"

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Hey Taryn, this is Ashley. Just gonna say that chapter two is good, but there are some minor errors, which you might want to change. In the first paragraph: "Jade was even more confused then before. She was lost. She was never one for listening to more then one person talk so when everyone began to -quite literally- scream there ideas out, she spaced out and began to think of the sponge bob theme song.", the word(s) 'then' should be 'than' because that is the one that you meant, and 'sponge bob' should probably be spelled like so "Spongebob"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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