Place (Take Me There)

Take me to some place where I can feel again.

Where everything is brighter. 

Where I finally have what I lack.

Take me to that place.

I just want to feel. Feel happy.

'Cause right now,

Everything inside is breaking. Tearing.

I've been consumed. Drowned. 

I'm reaching out. Hoping someone will lend their hand. 

And lead me to my fantasy land.

I just want to feel. Feel happy again.

I want everything to be brighter. 

Please...just let me find what I lack. 

Reviews

[Pixieblue]

I look through my read requests and its like you have literally lived my life for three years.
"Everything inside is breaking. Tearing.
I've been consumed. Drowned. "

I can't even say it gets better, i wish i could.
Because it's never what you lack, its what people have ripped away from you in the most painful way.

[FallenAngel]

you poured out your heart, and thats what i love of your poetry :) very well done

[Pryde Foltz]

'Cause right now,

Everything inside is breaking. Tearing.

I've been consumed. Drowned.

Great write. The juxtaposition between sentence and fragment created a really effective pace.

[Mayank]

If you really wanna find what you "lack" you shouldn't stop, lemme tell you "so called love" is not the precious thing.

[Briana O'Connor]

The thought you have here is a very powerful and common want. The way you expressed the need to find happiness was alluring and memorable. Well penned. Thank you for sharing.

[Heather]

Your search isn't useless, when you look into the darkness you don't see the light, remember, darkness is just a lack of light, some of it still remains. Being broken doesn't mean that you need to be fixed, life can suck, it can also be amazing. Appreciate the little things in life because they contribute to making you who you are today. You are amazing, don't let anybody tell you otherwise because there is no right or wrong way to feel, heck we don't even know what right or wrong truly means! Only you can truly know how you feel and what you think you lack but the fact that you have reached out for help means you are finding yourself. You are only human :) Never forget that you are NOT alone :D This is beautifully written, great job :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you so much. You've made the world of difference. *Smiles*

[Heather]

You are very welcome :) I'm glad, if you ever need me or anything just holla, I'm here for you matey :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Okay, I will. (: