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Falling. Falling. Falling.

I'm at the bottom. At the lowest.

Fighting. Fighting. Fighting.

Can I really beat this? Will I beat this?

Thoughts rush through.

I can't talk. I don't want to listen.

I'm unfocused. What's going on?

Sinking. Sinking. Sinking

Inside. I'm afraid I've already died.

I can't write. I can't write. 

There's just too much.

What am I doing? What am I doing?

All sense is gone.

...All hope has been lost.

Reviews

[Mary Ochoa]

Great writtten friend. Thank you for sharing:)

[Mayank]

I was hit by melancholy while reading this... superb!

[Briana O'Connor]

The sadness and helplessness in this piece speaks volumes. The emotions you have spun are palpable and leave a mark on the reader. Well penned. Thank you for sharing.

[Brook]

Very pessimistic, but wonderful. I love the use of short stanzas, it's really effective. it's like you're struggling to find the words to say. A very wonderful write though, Jessica.

[Jackson H. Harley]

I love this, the quirky (if that's the right word) structure helps to emphasis the various emotions within the words, great work :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you.