Remind Me

Remind me how it's like to smile,

Remind me how my laugh sounds like,

Make me remember how it's like to look into someone's eyes deeply,

...& know nothing else matters,

Wrap your arms around my waist,

So I could know I'm finally safe,

Let me slide my hands up your back,

& rest my head on your shoulders,

So I could know this is real,

...& not just a beautiful dream,

Let's stay standing here,

& whisper in my ear that you love me,

Don't ever let me go..

..I never want this to end,

Just you,

& I,

Nothing else here,

Or there,

Make all of my mental,

& physical scars go away,

..Save my broken heart..

Don't let things tear us into shreds,

Don't let anything come in between us,

Making us just a memory...

Hold onto me,

Because I'm here right in front of you,

Holding you,

I won't ever try to let you go,

Or hurt you,

You mean more than the world to me,

i had nothing inside of me,

It was dark..

Dead..

& empty...

You came around & lit my insides brightly,

It came to a surprise to me,

Because nothing before had ever done that,

So I'm begging you constantly,

Don't leave me,

I love you,

Beyond the stars,

& the moon,

I swear...

I love you,

Please don't make me regret the things I have just said,

Don't hurt or leave me,

Don't take me for granted,

..& don't break my trust,

My heart,

..Or me..

I love you..

I swear I do..

You're the only thing that's inside of me,

..The only thing that matters now.

Reviews

[Emily]

I love your wording and the meaning! Keep it up!

[Chris Micha]

Did you mean "Let me slide your hands up your back" or "let me slide my hands up your back"...?

It's minor but my imagination was trying to picture that and it got weird.

Overall pretty good, but I think your creativity is better than you realize, so explore it.

:)

[Luna Zerimar]

Haha, I fixed it. Thanks for watching my grammar. (:

Thank you so much, and I don't know how I'm going to explore my creativity at this point.

Your review is greatly appreciated!

[Brook]

Very beautiful, Jessica.
You're a really good writer.

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you, Brook. You're a good writer as well.

[Chloe_Spence]

Such a beautiful poem :)
I hope that whoever this poem is aimed at NEVER takes you for granted :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Unfortunately, they do. But, thank you.

[star73]

nice put a lot of feeling with those words of love thanks for sharing!!

[Luna Zerimar]

And thank you for reading. (:

[Aguilar]

Aw such a beautiful cute poem ^_^

[Luna Zerimar]

^~^ Thank you.