Destruction

Destruction

A Poem by Luna Zerimar

Fake smiles & sarcastic laughs no longer exist,
Depression's overcome you,

You're pretty much dead inside..

Becoming anti-social with cuts on your wrist,
Don't want people to worry,

Big scenes still occur..

Losing things,
Losing people,
It's too much,
Look in a mirror,
Take your fist,

& shatter that glass!

Don't you think you've had enough?
Don't you think you've suffered,

& have been tortured enough?
I say get your blades out!
Take all of those pills!

Shove all of them down your throat!

Fill up thousands of glasses!

& drink them all!

Get up!
Go & tell everyone what you think of them!

You don't give a f**k!

You're all bloody!
Also drugged up!

Get into fights,
Don't back down,

You better not back down...

Make people cry,
Make people hurt,

Then leave..

Just walk away...

Hurry...

Everyone's looking,

Run into your house,
& make it a mess,

Break everything!

Everything...

Then go to your room,

Take those last pills,
& drown them down your throat with beer,

Take those last cuts,
Lay on the floor,

& smile sweetheart,

Because when you close your eyes,

You won't EVER wake up,

..And that's exactly what you want.

© 2014 Luna Zerimar


Author's Note

Luna Zerimar
Best I could do on Writer's Block.

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Intense and raw. I like the I don't give a f**k spirit. Strong piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Luna Zerimar

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Rob.

I wrote it with the, "I don't give a f**k" attitude. It did me well.
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You write pretty well for writer's block! Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Luna Zerimar

10 Years Ago

Haha, you think so? Thanks Elliott. (:
That was so sad yet very powerful!
keep writing- you are very good at it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Luna Zerimar

10 Years Ago

I would like to think so.

But, I'm just amateur.

Thank you, though. (:
Chloe_Spence

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
that is awesome, lots of emotion and very powerful!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Luna Zerimar

10 Years Ago

Haha, thanks. I appreciate it.
Justin

10 Years Ago

your welcome, i like it, keep it up!!!
What writers block? that was powerful and rather scary. I refer to the visual and the emotions it evokes in you. Just wow

Posted 10 Years Ago


Luna Zerimar

10 Years Ago

._. Is it really that good?

Thank you for reading. (:

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Luna Zerimar
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