Stuck

I'm stuck in a broken state,

I'm dealing with ache,

Towards myself I feel hate,

"Can you save the broken?"

Many people have at least tried to help me,

But I won't let them in,

..Can I ever be saved?

Reviews

[Simon Welsh]

Time is all it takes. Nicely written.

[Luna Zerimar]

True. But, time's taking its sweet time. I wish it would hurry! Thank you for reading.

[Laur]

simple yet hard hitting, great poem

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you. I appreciate your feedback.

[Aguilar]

Wow I totally know that feeling anyways great poem

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you. (: I appreciate your feedback.