A Rustic Kind of World

The unequalable device made the design of man squander into history, 

The wunderkind was especially superlative in power over the skin and bones of the world. 

Man, becoming inferior, 

made expedient decisions to stigmatize the fate of humanity, 

but their sanguine outlooks faltered in the war of machines. 

Reviews

[Relic]

~This is very reminiscent of the set up for war of the worlds. A society taken over by machines intent on taking over the world with technology unseen and unheard of by man. Whether sci-fi or as the writer below mentioned, a set up for a Dystopian society to come, it is nonetheless a very interesting poem.~

[Ada]

In my mind I was seeing this as like the game: Resonance of Fate.
Thank you for the review

[DoormanDan]

This is a very well written and pretty thought provoking piece you have written You demonstrate that you have an extremely good vocab with this piece, and that you are able to think outside the box a bit as well. I really enjoyed reading this :)

[Ada]

Thank you, I really wanted to think more strategically with words in this piece, rather than emotion focus on something mechanic and interesting to think of.
Thank you for the review

[~]

What will ever remain in this world, and where does our fate stand? Will AI really take over?

[Ada]

Where ever the future might go, I will always fear Al.

[Chadvonswan]

It had a rather dystopian feel, surreal like from the perspective of remote controlled drones destructing society...or who knows, that's what was evoked in me. Or maybe I've been listening to too much Muse.
Anyways nice write !!

[Ada]

I guess it was sort of inspired by a world such as in Resonance Of Fate, which is a videogame with a more steampunk society.
Thank you for the review.