Glimpse

She was a hotbed of roses

 

Along the walk
I watched
as roses, red
moved
in rhythm to
the stops and starts
of city window shops--

but then
the light turned green
and I passed
this bounty by...
whose hem flowed,
as she walked
along the garden rows.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Vertigo]

hmm I like this its simple but nice

[black_rose_obsession]

I like it, I think the flow might be a bit rough for my taste,but it's definataly one of those eye catching writes...good work!