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Reviews

[Allycat]

I love how your poems can have meaning without any words at all! Using numbers was very creative

It's the secret code...... yes, it is!!!

[Cosmic kid]

Beautiful, mindfucked me but beautiful.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Okay, now I am intrigued. Your profile speaks of 3s 4s and 9s which have meaning to you. I see solid rows of first 3s then 9s then 4s which if spoken seem to scream
three...nine...four. Or maybe just the meaning and order is found in the series of 3s 9s and 4s. As you mentioned in response to Tabitha t's review that you were screaming out to anyone who would listen...we hear you even if we don't understand exactly. Quite brilliant of you really.

[Tabitha t]

honestly.... I think thia is going to go over almost everyones head. There isnt enough of a clue to lead us to know what this piece means and without some kind of hint I feel as though this was a waste of read request. sure not all poetry is wordso okay I get it but it still has to have some kindof meaning. sorry for the negative review but....

[Whales]

It's okay, I don't mind, I thought I would do this because it's my way of screaming out to anyone who will listen because words cannot express...just the haunting and disgusting thoughts and my horrid way of thinking. It's just an attempt to help people understand my insanity .

[Tabitha t]

if you had put that as a caption I think it would have made more sense. I like the concept but maybe it was a bit to much abstract

[Whales]

But it would destroyed the meaning if I put words. But it's okay, I just find this situation ironic. your status thing says: everyone's a critic, and look at you! :) Thank you for your impute though, people like you keep me sane.

[Tabitha t]

lol i am everyone and I am in no way excluded from my status. everyone has the things they love adn then those few things that they do not like. I think what happened here is that your piece was so heavy and did hold such a big meaning behind it that I was unable to grasp the concept and for that I am going to congratulate you

[Whales]

Kinda just flailed around. good for you! you made a complete stranger happy! add that to your list of epic things today! (if you thought that was sarcasm is wasn't)

[Tabitha t]

lol I will take that with a light heart and a nod of the head. :) I enjoy your work so keep it up. the ones I am to commercialized for I will take with small bites

[Whales]

im trying to understand... the ones i am to commercialized for i will take with small bites...i dont get that yo.

[Tabitha t]

I am to commercialized to understand your never been done before kind of work. Youthink in a way that society doesnt usually show. We the people have been dumbed down to generic blahhness.... you are a fri=uit loop in a world of cheerios. I the cheerio cannot understand your colors. idk lol

[Whales]

I getcha i'm actually really happy for once...thank you

[Tabitha t]

well i am very glad! you are welcome. I am now going to say this wasnt a waste because I really enjoyed our banter!

[Whales]

quite. i do enjoy our little talks Buttermen. mmm

[Tabitha t]

lmao delicious?

[Whales]

QUITE DELICIOUS THANK YOU. :D

[Tabitha t]

my pleasure! anytime you need a sugar pick me up just let me know. I am quiet happy to have been of service

[Whales]

Lol what are we talking about.

[Tabitha t]

lol i have no clue at this point.

[Ama May Cooper]

I can see some sort of pattern but i can't gather a touch on a meaning or even a chorent pattern enough to understand....but i would love to know what's behind this piece.

[Whales]

Listen to them.

[Archia]

I'm gonna be honest, I don't get this at all. Although I do somehow see that it seems to be more than just random numbers put together, though I can't find any pattern. The thing is though, I want to understand this, I want to know that there is something to this. Any chance of an enlightening? Though that's okay if you don't want to. There seems to be a lot of 4's I think, perhaps...

[eglantine]

a woven piece of numerical statments. Not all poetry is conducted through words.