Whales of Temptation And many Pieces of Broccoli

Whales of Temptation And many Pieces of Broccoli

A Poem by Whales
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Small is supposed to be capitalized

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These urges,
I can't explain.
Gone I must with tiny rocks
Voxitica flowers and a Small screwdriver.
I have to stop these,
Ghostly thoughts,
That quietly creep through the underbrush of my mind.
Skocking my brain with horrifying images.
Trying there hardest to break me. 
They will never break me.
I see death everyday in my head
These pictures are silent with fear.
I see myself die.
These people. They show me things I don't want to see.
But it's okay.
I will scream tonight.
There will be no sound,
But I will scream.
Showk my voice into the sky and space.
Everyone will hear my silence.
No one will turn away in disgust
But in beauty of my passion of feeling.

© 2013 Whales


Author's Note

Whales

Words I have invented
Voxitica: Is a type of flower, deep purple and similar to an Iris.
Skocking: Beating, probably with a blunt object.
Showk: Whispering screams.

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"the underbrush of my mind" beautiful, wish I had written that lol. sp error: "showk" should be "shock" ? turning away from emotional passion in disgust... interesting and so true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Whales

12 Years Ago

It's not a spelling error, i make up my own words. Thank you though!
eglantine

12 Years Ago

ok you just got a hundred times more awesome lol
Whales

12 Years Ago

Voxitica is also made up read Brinacole, that poem is almost all words i made up
dark. really dark. i loved "everyone will here my silence".
Indeed, most times a silence is stronger that a scream.

Globy
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Posted 12 Years Ago


A white cry in silence, visible but not audible in the night. Beauty rising from passion. I think it is an emotional poem, I can see there is terror and also self confidence. A poem balancing between opposite urges or feelings. Even the last lines speak about contrasting emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


passion and patience come from the same latin root, it amazes me that compassion means to suffer with

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Southborough, MA



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