Rainbow Joe

The aesthetics of it were beyond imagination.

While they walked by me, they stopped and gazed at the magnificent beauty.

I was actually crying.

The feeling was absolutely wonderful.

There was nothing that could compare to it.

I felt like a whale.

Finally.

I was happy, elated.

But also forlorn.

And I was enraged,

Disgusted and terrible.

And it was all worth it.

I was crying, I was actually crying.

Curled up on the floor.

My face was scarlet and tears were spewing out of my eyeballs.

I was screaming with pain

It was the best feeling I ever felt.

I am so alone.

Reviews

[Allycat]

I have no words, this poem is so beautiful..I don't know why but I teared up a little bit, especially at the last line: "I am so alone." Its amazing actually, I can feel the emotions as I am reading it. Your writing never ceases to amaze me, wonderful job Sam

[Emily B]

i've been there, i recognize the agony

[Pritesh]

Great poem! word selection was excellent!amazing piece of poem!wonderful!keep it up!

[Whiskurz]

Sad and beautiful at the same time......Awesome imagery.......Whisk