Fools Game

Fools Game

A Story by Enigma
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I was in the process of continuing "Angel Of Death" and didn't think the background idea I had in mind fit.. so I quickly rearranged a lot and transformed it into this.. I really like it so far.

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“Are you f*****g kidding me? S**t, are you even hearing me right now? I swear on my life when I get out I’m going to report your sorry a*s to the authorities and have you killed.. “

“You swear on your life..? YOU of all people… Swearing on your own life…”

I snorted, uncrossing my arms with a light smirk.

 “Well damn…” I lifted her chin slowly letting our eyes meet, giving her a devilish grin.

“Darling… You can’t swear on something you no long own.” I grinned.

When someone swore on their own life was like a sweet game for me. It was sickening but it was fun to think about for the most part… Because I decided life or death for her.

 She didn’t believe a word I had said. Which I didn’t mind too much but it just meant she wasn’t going to help me like I planned… Which isn’t what I wanted.

Letting my eye slowly fade to their naturally pale color I looked almost blind as I watched her begin to shiver and tremble, unable to make a sound. I watched her quietly seeing the struggle she put up, still trying to rip the rope from around her hands

Muttering to myself I let my eyes wander the warehouse quietly, throwing my bag over my shoulders I stood and placed a smooth cigarette on my lips with ease, the pale dense black smoke trailing the inside of my lungs, degrading their beautiful structure into something horrid.

I loved thinking about it… How black and weak my lungs were getting… But of course, it

was being interrupted. I listened to the struggling of my new hostage in the distance and the foul language she used.

“I swear… I’m going to rip your throat out, after I kill you if you don’t f*****g untie me… I’m going to take that metal pole and shove it up your. . .” She continued with a snarled voice, clenching her teeth as she tried to wiggle loose once again.

She managed to pick a fight with the devil… For once, I was glad to be the devil in this situation.

                

                

© 2012 Enigma


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Enigma
I'm gonna be adding on to this for sure but.. I hope you enjoyed what I've done so far.

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Please, do add onto this. There is so much more to be done here. It starts a little cryptic - but now I want to know. There is a feeling of casual sadisticness around the 'kidknapper' character - until that end line 'for once, I was glad', which suggests so much more depth.

Very interesting build up the the character more than anything else. Thanks for sharing :)

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I like the title of this and how sadistic this seems to be... it's making me wonder what sort of fowl play is going on... please continue!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Please, do add onto this. There is so much more to be done here. It starts a little cryptic - but now I want to know. There is a feeling of casual sadisticness around the 'kidknapper' character - until that end line 'for once, I was glad', which suggests so much more depth.

Very interesting build up the the character more than anything else. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on July 3, 2012
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Tags: Dark, Mysterious, Romance, Random, Different, Kidnapping, Heist, Awkward, Preview, Devil, Fantasy

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