Speed.

Meh.

Green light, follow the signs

Red Light, don’t stop

You’ll be left behind

Just keep going

 

Faster, Faster you hear

The roads long, growing longer

The air his crisp and pure

Red light

 

The roads full of turns

Left, Right, Right, Left

Each leads a different past

A fork in the road

 

Slow Down, Slow Down

You continue to speed up

The night sky burn bright

The suns light awakens

 

Each day is a new journey

Just break away and keep moving

Don’t stop. Don’t be left behind.

The world is always turning.

The world is yours.

Reviews

[Azariek]

Really good job, Foreseen. I liked how you used repetition to really emphasize the point of "speeding up". Some punctuation editing might be in order, but that may be just my stickler self talking. All in all, great piece :3-Azariek

[Chris]

I liked this BECAUSE you had something to say and you DID say it.
It moved quick because it NEEDED to move quickly.

Don't sell yourself so short... others will always do that for you - and usually for free.

Take care,
Chris