Hide & Seek.

Hide & Seek.

A Poem by Enigma

Everyone Hides, and everyone seeks.
Everyone Speaks and everyone cries.
Sometimes we even laugh.

Everyone Seeks and everyone hides.
Sometimes under a chair, in a tree.
Everyone looks and looks.

Everyone Hides and everyone seeks.
Sometimes it takes minutes, or weeks.
For some it takes seconds.

Hide and Seek is a game we all play.
Sometimes we get lost,
others eventually get found.

Sometimes, We were never lost.
~~ Hide & Seek.

© 2011 Enigma


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This flowed beautifully and proved an interesting movement of words until that last line where you had a typo - what a pity! (We WERE never lost)

I would be marking this higher because there's a multitude of creavity in your post but ..

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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